Maintaining quality content while doing more.
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Nov 23, 2022
Maintaining quality content while doing more with Lily Ugbaja. Sign up for her emails: https://marketingcyborg.com/ LEMA Framework: Logic, Explicit, Memorable, Actionable.
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thank you thank you
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hey everyone welcome to the messaging matter show my name is Todd Jones I'm
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the host and always happy this is one of my funnest
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things to do every month um I get somebody smart like Lily on the line and let them talk to us about what
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they're expert in and it's just fascinating to me and sometimes they go on uh for an hour so we'll try not to go
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on for an hour today but let me introduce my guests to you but but look before I do that let me do a couple
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house keeping things if you are someone who watches this show regularly either live or on the replay
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one channel with this existing email address so I'm really happy about that but we will be moving that to the new
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channel by January if not next month so just to let you know that if you're
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somebody who watches the show but these videos will stay here so if you link to this video it won't go away
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um so just a little bit of a housekeeping uh note before we get going
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and I see my friend the vendor is in this in the chat room so hey davinder the vendor is one of my good friends for
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a very long time so I thought maybe some of the Lily's friends will be here because they were really interested in
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the social media about this but let me introduce my guest her name is Lily
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um abortia did I say that correctly close yeah
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she's got a lot of Grace toward me and uh she is the uh content expert at
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marketing cyborg.com and she has got a lot of experience actually
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writing for some well-known uh product companies and we will talk about that uh
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shortly but uh Lily welcome to the show to be here
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I was watching a little bit of your presentation you did earlier this year and very clear very easy to understand
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and some very good uh content there tell us a little bit about some of the
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organization some of the companies you have written for there who's who in the SAS space
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yeah I I didn't actually startled writing for the who is who but I'm lucky
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to have written for Brands like Hub Sports and um and hot jar and data box and
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the list can go on yeah yeah you just actually showed you're on
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Twitter this morning you uh put out about an article you wrote for uh zapier and so I hadn't had a chance to dive
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into it because I'm pretty sure it's long but I thought that was really cool and it came out today that you're coming
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on the Mastery matter show and thought Oh what a great uh just social proof for what you have done
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um so anyway um back in July I'm see if I can do this
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actually I've created an overlay back in July you made a tweet which I was like oh yeah yeah this is
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really great I love what you said and I'm gonna see if I can put that overlay up there it's probably not the
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best but um you said Brandt I think we should all
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slow down content we should stop using the excuse of shorter attention spans to
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create fast-paced boring content I'll share my full thoughts on this someday uh but long and short let's write human
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to human uh useful context even if they already know
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um and I replied to you about that as you can see there's 114 likes seven
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quote tweets and 15 regular tweets uh about for this particular tweet and um
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as and I invited you to come on the show talk about it and you graciously accepted so
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um can you tell me a little bit about what you were thinking about when you tweeted that and did you follow up uh
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with um you know actually putting your thought to paper or something like that
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or is this it but I I still have plans to
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um do like um especially now that I've started the newsletter I have plans to expand on that but I never really got to
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do this um what I had in mind when I I tweeted
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that with so I've seen a lot of um fits on Twitter
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very direct and let totally shots
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sometimes you were kind of coming in and out there
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oh I was saying I do not have a problem with Clarity but sometimes we tend to
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sacrifice the uh the full context behind the context that
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we're putting out there in favor of being Chris and shocked and to the point
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and I think that these uh um justification behind this is that
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people whereas
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you find that people can sit for hours and watch movies people can pick up a
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book and not put it down until they are done with it and so the problem isn't shorter station spans the problem is
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that we are not putting in enough work to retain the reader's attention
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so you're direct the issue where it should be it's not about shutting in the copy it's about connecting with readers
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now when you're talking about copy you're talking about long-form content you're talking about content on blogs
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that kind of thing yeah do you apply that and I actually have a
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thought on this but to like Just landing pages or website copy Pages as well do
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you think it's the same thing there I I see I was actually doing a project recently and I would look at the
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competitors of the person that I was doing the content for the website copy and their their Pages would be just
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incredibly short they might throw some images or something like that but the actual content just didn't say anything
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and I was just like you know there's just not much depth there from either an SEO standpoint or
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even a marketing standpoint yeah so I think that it's even more
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important in copyrights and to say crime and really connect with the audience
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instead of being just direct and these are the benefits for signing up for products and these are our features I
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think in copy especially we should take the time to slow down and connect with
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the audience yeah I think that uh that's a problem
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people don't connect with the audience and it's more I like the I think a lot of content is uh overly
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informational it's like let's throw as much information as we can maybe cut out some of the content
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because oh people don't read right let's let's cut out some of the context we don't need that sentence but uh and
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instead of actually um connecting with the audience and that
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brings up another point that I have thought about is Are you delivering information only or are you trying to
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get trying to get your your audience to do something
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exactly like you know when um we put out content that it's just you
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know completely direct and just saying this and this and do this and do that it feels like we're just instructing
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instead of like um taking the audience through a transformational experience
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I'm gonna use actually concerning copy I'm going to use my website as an example when most people come to me for
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my freelance Services one of the things that they really talk about is my website and my website is the most long
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and you know the most lengthy copy I've seen for a copywriter but I feel like
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what I did that makes those people that gives them the opportunity to see
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the transformation that they can um experience for themselves is that I
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paint the problem I let them visualize the solution what
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it can be instead of just saying I write um blog posts and they rank and here's an
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example of a blog post that I've written and then there's little things that may
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seem irrelevant like my background as a blogger being able to tie in those things kind of gives the work more depth
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a personality uh let me give an example did like content
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I think shots and direct content is like
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going to say the uh your ophthalmologist and he or she tells you okay your vision
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isn't very good and you need a pair of glasses to sell better that's us slow
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down content where your ophthalmologist says I saw you feel for the share when you wanted to sit and I'm pretty sure
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those headaches you describe that they signal your vision isn't very good and
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so you need a pair of glasses because I don't want you falling over the stairs and I don't want you not [ __ ] over your favorite dress there's a connection
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that comes in the second slot down concept it takes longer to deliver
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the message but then the The Listener can actually feel the transformation
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they actually recognize the problem in themselves like if you don't give that full context
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they may be like come on it's just a headache I just probably need a aspirin or something
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as someone who had headaches because my vision was changing in college so I totally relate to that uh little story
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you just told and you're it sounds like you're doing the classic Pas problem agitate solution which is a very classic
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copywriting formula that can be used in blog writing as well um there's a couple things I want to add
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to that or to talk about in regards to that the second one I'll do after this but
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there is there a time where getting to the point is really a better solution
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I'm thinking about food blogs right um thanksgiving's coming up in America in a couple days uh Happy Thanksgiving
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everybody um so maybe somebody said starts searching for a cranberry salad recipe
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so they start looking oh there's a cranberry salad recipe at this great blog and they go to the blog and they're
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looking for the recipe and what they get is like 800 words about Grandma used to
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make this Grand Prairie's Grand cranberry salad and we loved it and blah
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blah blah it's like I just want the recipe thank you I think there's a time and place where being direct is a good
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thing and I think what what you're referring to is a business not a
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lifestyle blog but a business who is trying to nurture people down the funnel
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would you agree with that well I I have a couple of thoughts about
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this this uh good blogs for example they're like on the far end of the spectrum and
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then there's business blocks on the far end of the spectrum and I feel like each um each one might not be doing like a
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very good job do you want to come up and state you
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know when someone lines on a page they want to know that they're on the right page and so they need to immediately
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relate to whatever it is that you're saying and they may not be linked to your grand
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Mastery there's a way to within the story without making the story The focal point of the attention of their article
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you know where people are reading through and they're using the
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story without even noticing that there's a story it's just the story makes it more relatable to them
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and so you're not and I think this ties in really well to what we're going to
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talk about concerning the linear framework logic this is the place where you know logic means a couple of the
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things that are not meant to be in there instead of just rambling right yeah I would say I would tell the
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uh the recipe blogger to go ahead and put that recipe at the beginning and
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then do your story and then repeat it at the end and I call it if you're not careful you will I think the word is
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from journalism you will bury the lead you need to put this is something I've
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been thinking more and more about lately largely after interviewing Maddie Osmond last week who's the author of this book
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writing for humans and robots um she talked about you know leading with your lead l-a-d-e
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the the uh important information like a journalist does uh because I'm used to writing these um hook worthy
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introductions which I do like doing but I'm rethinking it a little bit maybe I should at least put a summary sentence
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before I could do the hookworthy uh introduction so it's just something I've
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come back to to think about but whether you're writing a recipe blog or you're
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writing a Blog for zapier or your company um you should not bury that lead that's
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the that's the phrases that Maddie uses in her book so you you have that summary
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so that people will know that there are in the right place before you get into the content and you start using the
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story and that kind of thing I mean that's kind of what I've been thinking about yeah I think
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um a way to um check
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let's call it a litmus test a litmus test to check if what you're saying the story that you're um telling is actually
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useful is if this story wasn't about you
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will the audience be able to see themselves in it because yeah no one cares that your grandma make the
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best roast turkey if they can't actually see themselves you know what does it have to do with me
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yeah and and I think that's when you put on the lens of the audience you can be
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able to filter your stories in such a way that you're actually giving stories that they can relate to and connect to
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and you're not losing them and I also agree with you know putting the
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when I was at animals we had this concept called Bluff I know it's a journalism uh thing also where you want
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to State the bottom line up front to me it doesn't necessarily mean summarizing
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the article of the front I think I will call it stating a kisses
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up front I don't know if I'm saying that right it's getting like that this is up front
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and this is the front yeah yeah like the idea that you're trying to make yeah that's probably well you know in a
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in a in a blog content article I think that's probably a better way of looking at it for sure uh I'm thinking about it
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in terms of about Pages because I'm always rethinking how I do write about pages I am the about page guy after all
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yeah if you know me on Twitter um but um but yeah that so you don't want to bury the lead and you know your
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thesis your summary uh whatever that um that logic is that you talk about in
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their framework which we'll get to in just a minute I want to bring up one more thing before we get into your Lima
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framework uh that's l-e-m-a right Lima um because you're slowing down and
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because you're doing some of the things you're talking about at the beginning of the the uh the interview
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um that's going to take that's going to mean taking some time to get to know the audience and learning research if you
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will learning about what those pain points are actually you can't just die into writing an article without knowing
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that is that would you say that's correct that is like 100 correct so at the top of every drafts that I create I
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have three questions what do they do what do they want to know what do they
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need to know and you cannot answer those questions if you do not know the audience and I think that these questions also
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make sure that you're leading with at least what they want to know or what they need to know instead of what they
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already get like say you're writing an article about the pandemic you don't
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lead with a pandemic workout into 2020 because like every was it 2017 2019
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because like everyone knows that common knowledge yeah
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yeah that makes sense do you have uh you know I think uh he can there's a there's
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an element of research to that right I mean because that you know I've read a number of different people talk about
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our friend Adrian Barnes she does the Persona she's just personas and she uses the jobs to be done framework to do that
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um and I think that's a good way for for overall and then you should go to grow and convert the guys from growing
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convert talks about they call it SEO pain points but in order to do that you actually have to dig in in some cases
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actually have to you know uh the guys from Grove convert talk about interviewing people about listening on a
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sales calls and other customer service things to get those pain points or is
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that some of the things you you think about when you talk about learning what the audience needs to know
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that is the foundation of my strategy when I do strategy I want to know
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exactly who the audience of that very brand is not who they uh perceived
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Personnel is and so I'm looking in the CRM and I'm listening on the sales calls and listening on customer success and
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interactions and stuff like that but as a writer I don't think you need to go
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through all of that like you could easily learn as much as possible from a simple Google search
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about uh an audience if the company you're working with is doing their
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content strategy and Griffin rights there is a target audience at the top of the brief and so you fake they they are
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faculty at least if you don't have if the company doesn't get audience for you
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it's always smart to ask yeah who is the target audience for the space because they need to be the following Beacon for
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whatever you write and if you're able to get the target audience you can easily plug that into Google and filter for
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um forums or communities specific to that audience and just read the banter that they share
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with each other I get to know who they are they if they are senior level
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um audience in that industry walk with the senior level or person no
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you'll be able to find out those things by looking through the chats in forums
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have you ever used I I signed up for Specter recently that
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I haven't really gone into I only ran one such on it and I think it's like really really because it's so easy to
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find um the influencers and in uh certain industries in sponsors
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yeah I have a free account too and I haven't really dived into it but that's partly what they um you know uh promote
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that they do is audience research so I'm curious about that if that would be helpful to not just a rider like you but
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you know the company that you know you're writing for certainly you brought up the idea of a brief and absolutely if
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you're a writer you would hope to get a detailed brief from you know if you're
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writing for zapier or HubSpot you're likely going to get one of those um if you're a writer for maybe a
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smaller product uh maybe they don't have a brief maybe they don't have their
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audience to find those would be uh areas that a writer can help those companies I
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think uh do um wouldn't you say here so before I started writing for the
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bigger Brands all the brands that I'm rich for most of them will not actually have like a brief or they will have like
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a okay we won't Target the stock and stuff again they just give that to you and so I created a brief template
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where these are the things I need to work with and I send it to them and I'm
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like please can you feel these things for me and that's something that people can do to get more detailed in
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information and your clients will appreciate things for it too because they know now that you're not just taking in terms of the words on the page
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but like you're really you know trying to understand the strategy as a business and everything and how it all comes
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together to drive Revenue yeah I think that's a um a gap in the
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maybe knowledge base for some companies I mean I always tell people it's like look you don't know how to do it brief
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or whatever Kaylee Moore has got templates for briefs you you can buy them from her and literally follow the
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instructions she does a lot of things like that um but certainly copywriters a lot of
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content marketers they are they have briefs they work with um I think there's a maybe it's a
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knowledge Gap I'll be the right way of putting in I don't know a lot of Spar companies you're right I mean they're like hey I want to Target this keyword
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you know I want to talk Target this subject and you know um maybe those are things that are that
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they don't understand as much maybe don't make the connection so that's an area where I think a lot of freelance
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writers can increase their value uh to the company because I mean audience
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research is huge right I mean um I mentioned Adrian earlier she she
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does a personas a little differently I used to hate personas but now she's making me like them again but she's got
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a product on gumroad you can basically learn and it's not very much money and
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you can learn the process as a freelance writer right and increase your skill set
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or if you're a company and you're you need to understand a little bit more you can you can buy that off of gumroad
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um but uh there's there's so many resources out there and um I'm I'm really kind of interested in
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the companies that maybe fall short of some of this stuff so um
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that's where being a quality content writer um can can really play in and help a
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company out so let's go to your framework
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I think uh Lima l-e-m-a and that stands for logical
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explicit memorable and actionable so I'm curious to learn more about this
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framework so
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you know I um I think that when people want to skill
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um production if you're working with lots of freelance writers especially Junior writers you need some sort of
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um process some sort of um when I say chat places you know that they can consult and right
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you know that they're in the right they're moving in the right direction and for me the Lima framework is that
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um all a compassion um
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Gringo that I put my contents through and like you said it stands for logical
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and explicit and memorable and actionable so this first one is logical
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you know what's more frustrated than a piece of content that isn't uh that's
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just floss fluff but I found find the most frustrating is
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a piece of content that doesn't actually follow logic you know it just stops in the middle and it moves somewhere else
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and like there's lots of interesting tidbits of stuff in there but because it
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follows uh a a doctor that you can't actually
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follow comes confusing I've worked with a son
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of Freelancers I think subcontracting also attractive kind of relationship in the past and that was the biggest issue
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I would say it's not that they do not know how to do the research it's not that they do not um
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you know how to write beautiful words is that they do not follow in logic and when you don't follow logic you use your
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reader as fast as the other thing I think I believe that
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logic doors is that logic restricts your scope and this is like really really important in my seminar thread takeover
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I gave the example of tomatoes and how you could write four thousand words about tomatoes and it's true if you do
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not follow the logic of the audience who's going to be reading um the animal
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that we've written which somehow fights back to knowing who your audience is so
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if you if you cannot follow the logic of the audience you end up writing things that are interesting but they don't
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really want to know yeah so logic is like being relevant to the audience
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yeah it's like asking the answering the why well how
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the all the works the wick and the right other and for the Right audience
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knowledge level got you yeah that's totally great yeah
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the the the who what where and how those are and that's again that goes back to journalism right that's we we answer
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those questions as a journalist so you're you're you're asking people and I don't think
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they should but I think that's a skill set from journalism that that passes over into content marketing that's
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worthwhile so I find a lot of journalists do a really good job with content marketing I think that's one of
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the reasons right there yeah I I didn't realize you were a journalist and that's right not trained
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per se um I did some writing for a local publication in our state about startups
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and all that but I'm not really trained as a journalist that's kind of funny I have done
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uh some journalism as an untrained like didn't go to college for it but uh but
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you know I found myself doing some journalism Sports journalism at one time and then uh startups and technology that
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kind of thing and I have a good friend named Bobby uh weren't you used to be a journalist and he does content marketing
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now so I think uh and and I have a site locally in town called Conway scene it's
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a lifestyle news site and we are able to get some some students we have three
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colleges here one has a PR public relations and Communications Department and I have been able to work with some
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students in those Department well there one of them especially was trained as a journalist she's a very good Storyteller
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so that is a very good um skill set to have you know and you don't
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have to be like you don't have to go to college to pick up journalism skills right you know so anyway just think like
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a journalist a little bit yeah I believe so it's in and I think
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journalists are also really good at knowing where to stop because I think
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this is one of things I really struggled with when I first started out perfectionism and wanted to get it to
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the 100 which is also something that people need to remember when they're
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trying to skill content is that your 100 is not actually that different
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from a 90 student person who's who's reading it yeah I know that because journalists are
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always very deadline who oriented so they know where to stop and just ship
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well one thing you don't understand maybe in content Marketing in the journalism world is so fast fast paced
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and so they can knock out multiple articles in a day because I have to with
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a time crunch um whereas in content Marketing in general you can get some time to think about it
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time review it time to edit it whatever but journalism don't always have that
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luxury they've got to get especially like if there's I did Sports journalism
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for a while had to write an article about the game that happened that night and get it up
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before I went to bed you know that's uh you have to figure out how you're going
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to do it you know so it's kind of interesting it was always interesting to me to watch the game and then like I
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write my article and then I'm like look at four or five other people to see how they viewed the game as well we all did
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something different it was always kind of fun but anyway
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1000 degree code looking at the same event everybody's
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got a different thought way of doing it so yeah and I think that's like another thing because
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somehow journalists have the uh
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when I say Frameworks to make content be memorable even though you're writing on
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the time crunch because of these stories and the uh stuff that you put in there it becomes
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relatable to the audience and it becomes something that they can remember and that's like a really really good skill
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yeah and yeah if they can remember it later that's that's good uh Sports
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journalists uh in America from the 20s and 30s was a different animal even up
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through the 60s probably uh it was more storytelling if you look back at uh and this you know I'm thinking my my uh my
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data set is college football but they came up with names for for some of these
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players you don't always get that today for for instance I mean I read a book about Red Grange was a great running
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back at the University of Illinois back in the 20s um Grantland
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rice in his name he was a great writer back in the day he said he was like a
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galloping ghost uh running through the next thing you know that was his name everybody called
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him the Galloping ghost that's the kind of thing you got in sports journalism in
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that time era you don't get that so much today because you got the internet and everybody saw the game and you have the
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AP right up and maybe they throw some stats in not as much storytelling really in in sports Joe I miss that too so
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anyway um we gotten sidetracked and that's my fault uh the next one is explicit which
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I think you said in the notes is um Clarity can you talk a little bit about that
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yeah so um the first day is
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if I say something does the other person understand it in a
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way that I have settings yeah and I think that comes down to being really
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specific with whatever it is that you're saying for example I say
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um I say you should create content that is easy to read now easy to read I mean
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so many different things so isn't really could be our shots easy to read could be
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our big fonts yeah but when you you say
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exactly what you want to say so in the example I used for yes what I said was you need to create
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content that people do not that uses words that people do not Google as they
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read and so the person who's reading this clearly knows that what we're talking about is using simple words when
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you write and that's explicit and that's clear and it leaves your it doesn't leave your reader guessing right
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right A lot of people talk about um writing for and you know eighth or
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ninth grade education level maybe that's an American thing I don't know but um
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that that's a similar thing you we use words you don't have to Google you know if you can read on an eighth grade level
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education you know you can understand what we're saying and I think you know a lot of companies will throw a lot of
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Flowery language in their marketing materials and my favorite example of
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this is I don't know if you know Weird Al is but he's a musician in America and he does this a song called mission
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our mission statement or whatever the video is a is animated but it is very
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much about this you know and I don't have it in front of me so now I would be a hard time but if you go back and
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listen to that song you will know exactly what you're saying he's just he's using all these you know core
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competencies and you know missions you know blah blah blah very flowery language it's like what does that even
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mean and I think that's partly what you're talking about being more specific like my English comp professor in
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college would say now Todd I think you need to be a little more specific so yeah always been one of my issues
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it's one other thing for struggling a lot it's one thing to have a thought in your
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hand in order to be able to convey into the way that it is in your head it's such a way that the other person
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and so what I do is if I make editing content for example what I do is I say
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what are you trying to see here how does this mean to you
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um and we broke that and probe that and probe that also we've gotten to a point where even a five-year-old can
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understand what it is then like until there's no more question there's no more what are you trying to say here
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is that an internal thing you do with your team or like you know I know that
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uh with with website copy um and that kind of thing you can always use something like winter where they
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have a w-y-n-t-e-r uh peplahas group where you
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know and actually I've done this I've gotten paid a little bit you you look at like the value proposition headline or
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whatever tell them if you understand what they're talking about or not it's uh it's a really good thing but how
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would like a writer or even a you know regular uh uh company Product Company
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execute something like that to know that hey what I'm writing did they is there a filter you're running through do you
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like get some people to look it over and go you know tell you if they don't understand what you're talking about
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for me I think I've worked long enough with an Editor to be able to sponsor
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with my uh content is beginning to sound um what's the world I don't know what
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the word is I think for new writers if you can afford to work with an editor for a
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while do it if you can't and you can afford to pay an Editor to to earn like
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attitude do it I think the final check is when you're reading through the content if
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you can afford to then leave it allow it rest for a few days any combat experience that's the best hack believe
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me you're going to support places because you've forgotten all about this stuff and then you're reading it now
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with fresh eyes and like what what am I trying to say here what I'll be trying to say here
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yeah in uh in her book Maddie recommends I think five read-throughs
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um and each time you'll see something different that you didn't see and and uh I think that's a good thing I do like
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having other people looking over if if it's possible um to to because they see things you
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don't see whatever if that's possible if you're a smaller company and you're using freelance writers and you don't
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have an editor in place um you know there are some ways you can do that by that have another set of eyes
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actually if you go to copy act or something they've done recently I've noticed probably in the last few years and they probably did this before but
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they definitely do it now at the top you'll see like the authors the authors Lily Marjo uh peer review Todd Jones
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editor Joanna weed so you'll have like three names up there to let you to let
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the reader know that it's been filtered through three set of eyes you know and
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so that's that's really of course you know not everybody's copy actors but um I guess coming up with some sort of
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way to do it I really think editing you know so many people I know have have
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said that editing has really improved their writing but so many companies don't take that into consideration they
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just get the writers and the right writers right and there's a lot of things again I said knowledge Gap I
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think that's the way that's something a freelance writer could bring to the table say hey we really need to have an
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editor um anyway so yeah
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I think that would be like a very tough conversation to have because I've had awesome I've had the question
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they've worked with awesome editors and I've also worked with editors who
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are like you know this there's a difference between editing and copy editing and if
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you're unfortunate to work with a copy editor what you think is an editor don't
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actually the words just get flowery but the uh the essence of the article
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doesn't improve so yeah can you tell me it's off
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what would be the difference between a copy editor and a regular editor an editor is someone who uh looks at you
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article from first of all the content strategy aspect of it how does this
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meets the goal of this article how does this
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time to bring in business Revenue whatever does this address the audience does this
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address such intents does this address you know the reason why it was created for both the company and
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experts you know this is laid out logically
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where we don't miss stuff and where we're not uh rambling
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that's developmental editor and then it's also the next thing is talking
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about Clarity and is this Claire and there's this memorable and is this
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actionable because you know you can write the best content in the world but if leaders are not having actionable
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takeaways then they can Implement because people when people implement the
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stuff that you share that's when they remember you that's when they bookmark your article to come back to it that's
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when they share it that's when when they want to think about um when they think about a topic you're
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the first person to customize because they've taken what you've said and they've gotten results from it and that's what an additive does and editor
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go to your accountable to the structure and through the uh goals and to be
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answer the goals
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I'm sorry you got a visitor there
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to the goals and uh structure and Clarity and actionability whereas a copy
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editor is trying to make sure that so another a copy editor
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sometimes checks to make sure that your links are right and that you're linked
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into reputable sites and okay like the final eyes that looks
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through the content to make sure that you're using a grammatically correct sentences and that the flow is you know
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the Transitions and everything is just there they are fixed the upper layer of the concept
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whereas an editor fixes the foundation of the context
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and I think in a lot of situations especially maybe smart companies that that particular roles probably put
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together like combined because it's kind of hard to you know you're talking about splitting those roles and you have the
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money to pay both of them so maybe the Smart Companies got somebody who handles both of it there definitely needs to be
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a I guess a proofreading element obviously to make sure the links are correct dramatically correct and the the
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editor part of it you're talking about is something I think a lot of companies maybe Miss
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um so that would that would be I think it's great if you can do that um memorable how can we make content
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more memorable hmm no one you shared about the uh spot
43:38
journalism stuff you did back in the day if I were to remember this podcast it
43:45
would probably be the first thing that I remember and from there I'll be able to relate to other points that we made on
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the podcast because I remember that because that is something that is relatable to me and it's something that
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I can easily visualize and that's what memorability is about you want to be
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you want to stand out you want the content that you're putting out there to be something that when a reader sees in
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future like when a reader is Googling and they see a couple of brand names you
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want yours to be the first they click even if it's on position number five and the only way to do that is to create
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content that is memorable that we can associate with the filling
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a visualization and that's something we achieve through using examples and stories
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mm-hmm yeah yeah I think so um
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yeah I think another this is kind of an extreme example but one way to be memorable is to create something that no
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one else will dare to try to copy your content is so yeah strong so exhaustive
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so big so memorable that you know hey I would give it a shot but that's just you
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know we don't have the time we're on the resources or whatever because there's so much copycatting in our world you know I
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mean um skyscraper content right uh let's take what was there and do it now that
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is like a copycat situation you know and that's what they were trying to do originally with copy with skyscraper
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content is to do more than but when you start talking about companies putting out books you know stuff like that
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you're getting into a different world and you know so
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foreign [Music]
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you've kind of Frozen up on me I don't know if you can hear that or not I mean
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can you hear me okay you're unfroze now
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okay
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kind of Frozen up
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I think she's gonna try to rejoin us
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nothing like technical difficulties
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so um the next part of her framework is actionable and
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um we'll have her on again here shortly but um in her notes she's a step-by-step uh
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showing tools takeaways uh I would think like in terms of call to actions getting
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the person reading to take a step um there are a lot of ways you can do
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that one of which of course is good people to sign up for an email newsletter or to do a download or book a
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call those types of things are you there
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I am okay I'm just going to leave my video
47:39
that's fine that's fine we I kind of moved on to actionable
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she is uh had some tech issues today and I think a visitor uh one of our little
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uh children is staying home so that's been kind of a challenge for her but
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certainly the Lima framework is uh I think a very good framework
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and something I think that uh is an easy thing to remember the it's
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memorable in that regard that's why I like Frameworks and I have my own I call it the REO framework but the Lima
48:30
framework uh logical explicit memorable and actionable so that last in
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is to be uh more actionable um have a checklist give them that
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checklist um foreign
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but I am a fan of checklists and uh
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so I asked her some questions in the notes um how can we improve our content quality as a sole or small team
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um and she said I think content quality comes down to the brief your goal as a
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content manager is to make sure that your brief includes action items that lean into the Lima framework uh Logic
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for example is to create or approve outlines and you should this is where you set a logical structure for the
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piece call out clearly explain include an
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example hey
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I'm sorry you're fine I was just trying to answer some of the questions you had
50:07
in the uh uh the document and uh but we wanted to kind of finish with the
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actionable um okay okay
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I don't know how this works I can see you fine
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yeah can you uh elaborate on actionable a little bit before we uh wrap this up
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sorry what did you say can you um elaborate on being actionable
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as we wrap this up okay so the most important thing you want to
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do in your content is drive people to take action because the reason why people sign up or the reason why people
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read your articles is because they want to do something they want to learn something and Implement what they've
50:58
learned to achieve um a goal and so you really want to include
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takeaways in in the contents that you've done so if you're sharing um
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let's say an uncle about five emails and email templates that people can use to
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to warm up their list or something in that um article as you write you're going to
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include examples so that people can visualize what it is that they need to do and you're gonna include a specific
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step-by-step instructions on how they actually need to do that
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I don't know if that makes sense screenshots of you going through the
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process so that they can follow along and Achieve what it is that they are trying
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to achieve with by reading your article yeah and so you're you're um you're a
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fan of uh downloads giveaways
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so it works with
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foreign
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okay you there yeah so I was just saying I'm not a big fan
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of um downloads because
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I prefer people to give up their emails freely because I'm a copywriter for
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example or a Content writer and I know how many email lists I've signed up to just because I wanted a Content asset
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and then I never read their emails right yeah I think it's a we've got a
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Tipping Point with emails right now and a lot of people have adopted the whole you know
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um sign it for me even my email without you know worrying about an asset so
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um it's certainly um it's something that I think people are
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trying to decide what they want to do with and on that note um marketing cyborg.com is her new
53:26
website and you can sign up for her email list and get uh yeah mad
53:32
scramblings of marketing Sciences dissecting strategy content and
53:37
analytics uh shared one to two times a month so if you want more of what Lily brought
53:44
to us today um then go ahead and go to marketingscyborg.com
53:50
and sign up for her email newsletter which I actually need to do and then I can get rid of some of the other emails
53:55
that I have and focus on yours so
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and you're going to do about once or twice a month is that right I'm sorry you're breaking up for me I'm
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you got to do emails about once or twice a month yeah yeah I um so I haven't actually
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gonna be released Thursday and it's about the Lima framework
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nice and after that it's gonna be once or twice a
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month yeah yeah very good well thank you for
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coming on I know it's a little challenging um but I think we got through it and if
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you want to know more about the Lima framework sign up for email newsletter that's coming out Thursday which is
54:49
Thanksgiving Day in the States but that'll give us an opportunity to read something that's not Black Friday
54:55
related and um so actually I'm gonna do that when we get done here and uh but
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anyway thanks for coming on the show thank you thank you so much and I apologies for all the
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brokers live shows are always interesting so I know you had your you
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had to have your buddy with you today uh he wasn't willing to go away so
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um kids kids want what they want right yeah all right thanks Lily
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all right thank you bye everyone
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well I know it was challenging but I think it still went pretty well it's a
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very very very good content and thoughts so I appreciate everyone