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hello I students thank you for choosing
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podcast.com my name is Daphne and today
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I'm going to focus on task one map
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questions which like the process
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diagrams or flowcharts are a bit more
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unusual but nevertheless it's really
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important to be able to answer them and
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to have had a bit of practice before
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your exam So today we're going to do
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three things we're going to look at a
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task one map question from our greats
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podcast.com doc course using two
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students essays and seeing why one one
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scored a band 7 7.5 and the other scored
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a band six and we'll look at another
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task map question from a course book and
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see how we could answer this one and
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then I want to give you lots of really
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useful and important vocab which is
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crucial that's to say really important
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for successfully answering these
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exam okay so here we go on the website
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or that goes with this you'll be able to
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see all the diagrams so have a look at
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these as this will will help you to
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understand and visualize what I'm
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talking about so to guide you I've
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colorcoded my corrections and
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recommendations to make sure that they
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correspond really easily to the band
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grades we're talking about as you know
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there's four areas of assessment so uh
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top comments I make to do with task
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achievement I'm going to Mark in red
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coherence and cohesion blue letal
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resource green grammatical range and
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purple so if you haven't yet come across
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the ask one map question they usually
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consist of two maps which might be of a
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landscape or island or a town one before
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and one after some kind of change and
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the question rubric asks you to
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summarize the information by selecting
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and Reporting the main features and make
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comparisons when necessary unlike other
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task ones the guide suggests 20 minutes
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of time and to write at least 150 words
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so the one we're going to look at is
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that map question which is part of our
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writing course um and you can find about
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more about that on the Alp podcast.com
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website the writing course is brilliant
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we see our students making great
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improvements uh with all parts of their
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writing task one and task two getting
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lots of practice on these different
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questions so on this uh image there are
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two almost rectangular Islands before
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and after some development work on the
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first one we can see a beach on the
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western side and then only nine trees or
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wooded areas scattered around the island
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some on the Northwestern Corner some on
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the northeastern coast and others
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located to the south in the after
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picture there are some accommodation
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blocks these are labeled accommodation
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blocks on the diagram uh on the western
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side three larger independent buildings
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in the center and next to further
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accommodation blocks in a circular shape
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on the right hand side of the map is a
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map on the right hand side is is a lake
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so foot paths and a vehicle track link
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the new buildings to a newly developed
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Pier so a pier sticks out into the sea
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and there's a few sailing boats in the
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sea so you can hear if you're listening
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carefully I'm already using quite
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specific language to describe directions
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this is really important you are going
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to need this and this kind of task on
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the left hand side or western side in
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the Northwestern corner to the south in
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the center to the east of and so on so
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make sure you're happy about directions
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the north south east west and then the
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more specific northwest southeast and so
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on also note in English we write these
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directions uh without a capital letter
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uh they can work as adjectives so in the
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southwestern corner or as a noun simply
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so how do we start with these questions
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so quite simply the same way as I
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recommend you start with a pie chart or
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a line graph you take a pencil and you
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Circle the significant differences
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between the two images look for Clues
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and in this uh map there are two or
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three huge Clues which many students
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miss or don't really think about what
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the clues are kind of saying before they
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start so the Clues here are really
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important to answering the task
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correctly the first clue if there is one
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look at the scale this is the clue to
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how big the island really is now this
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island is actually really small it's
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only about 500 M at half a kilometer
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long and this must give us a clue as to
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what kind of development has taken place
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it is far more likely to be a holiday
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Resort than a large new urban town uh
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now any uh kind of questions I read any
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responses I read that talk to me about
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regeneration no it it definitely could
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not be that on such a small
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island also it has no roads that would
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be a problem other Clues are in the
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labels so look carefully if you're given
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any labels look at these really
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carefully too words like accommodation
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and footpath are more likely to be
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associated with a hotel or Resort than a
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big new town uh finally the drawing of
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the two sailing boats in the after after
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picture also add to the idea of this
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being a holiday Resort so let's look at
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these two students essays and see how
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they answered this question so the first
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one which um is graded around about a
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band Six starts the illustration shows a
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piece of land before and after it went
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civilization okay well the second one
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which is more like a band 77.5 Begins
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the two maps represent a plan of
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construction for a new resort on a
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Island so immediately you can see which
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one gives me more information and the
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second one is making some things very
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clear the students looked at the scale
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assumed the changes a part of a resort
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development and told me the island was
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previously underdeveloped so these
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observations will help score highly for
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task achievement the first one talks
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about a process of civilization which is
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not wrong but it doesn't sound very
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natural the overall sentence look like
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this the first one says overall there
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are significant changes uh can be found
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so we should correct that significant
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changes can be found in the island
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particularly the new accommodation
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facilities public buildings at the
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center and SE Transportation at the
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part so let's look at this in more
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detail uh significant we like that word
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uh so they talk about significant
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changes can be found so nice passive
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voice that's great new accommodation yes
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fine that's labeled so we know what that
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is public buildings I'm not sure about
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this so for me a public building is like
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a library or a museum something big sea
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transportation again not sure there's a
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picture of two small sailing boats
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whereas seed transportation is
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suggesting to me a big cargo ship so I
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don't think the students really
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understood the scale of the map and
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because of this their understanding of
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the change isn't right this would impact
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achievement uh there's some language
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used for directions at the center and at
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the southern part but the wrong
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preposition so we would say in the
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center and in the south of the island so
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the second essay reads overall the
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resort uh the resort will be built all
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over the island and will include a hotel
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a reception houses an artificial lake
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and a pier now you may notice here that
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there is the future passive voice this
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is quite unusual it runs throughout this
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essay it's been done very well it's it's
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correct all the way through personally
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however I'm not sure about the use of
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future here but in the first sentence
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the students already suggested that the
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construction which would suggest a
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future idea imagine that there were two
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architects looking at Maps uh so that's
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why they're using the future voice here
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here um I think it would have been
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better to use the present perfect
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passive followed by the present tense so
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my sentence would read overall the
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island has been transformed into a new
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resort which includes and then you could
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say your hotel your reception
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whatever uh okay so let's look at the
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first essay again uh this is the next
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paragraph the piece of land presented
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has a wide Seashore with only about a
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fifth of its borders tied to land during
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the process of civilization the area
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went went through the vegetation there
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was reduced extraordinarily and both
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residences and buildings of social use
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were built one of them being a in order
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to make use of the territory Shore
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another noticeable change was the
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lake right so there's some good stuff
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here nice passive verbs vegetation was
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reduced residences were built and some
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good lexical phrases so a fifth of its
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borders tie to land during the process
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one of them being a peer in order to
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make blah blah blah okay so there's some
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nice some nice stuff going on there
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however my biggest problem is how this
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relates to the actual picture so because
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this is an island none of it is
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connected to land an island is not
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connected to land uh so in terms of
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coherence and Lexus we wouldn't talk
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about buildings of social use but we'd
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probably say residential buildings and
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I'm not sure about for me the process of
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civilization sounds more like Evolution
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like how man came into being so I would
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prefer to say the development F phase
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something like that or the development
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stage um so there there's problems there
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relating to the the coherence uh and
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also obviously to the task achievement
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although there is some good stuff there
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too so the second essay for me is much
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more concise and precise and I think
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from this you could probably draw the
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map which is always a test if you can
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draw the map then that's good without
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even looking at it so the island is
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about 200 M long and 800 M wide it is
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surrounded by the Sea and with a beach
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on the west side there are also some
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trees at various places close to the
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coast according to the new plan there
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will be a hotel with a reception and one
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more facility building in the center of
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the island while on both sides of the
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hotel there will be placed houses as
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accommodation for guests so there's
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confident use here of the present
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passive voice it is surrounded by the
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Sea a hotel will be placed and I like
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the fact that students giv me a size of
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the island and use vocabulary relating
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to Resorts so nice lexical range here
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Hotel reception facility building
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accommodation for guests that this all
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works well with the assumption that the
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changes are part of a new resort and
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showing me the size of the island
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immediately uh reassures me the student
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aha they they've looked at the
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information they've been given they're
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using that information to make some
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assumptions uh the first essay back to
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the first essay then the final paragraph
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reads like this the town as it presents
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itself after all the modifications
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displays three main buildings at its
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Center and two formations of the house
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accommodations one on each side there
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are two different kinds of path in the
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land disposition a footpath and a
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vehicle track that connect all main
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areas and enable the citizens
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Mobility okay so although there are no
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major grammatical errors here there is
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still the problem that the construction
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work is clearly not a town and I think
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the students therefore miss the
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opportunity to use some key vocab for
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adding geographical positioning so uh we
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could have had to the Southwest
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accommodation blocks have been built on
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the Far Eastern Shore a lake has been
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created uh also the tense running
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through this they've just used the
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simple present and I think this tasks so
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like the process diagrams as well shouts
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at you use the passive tense it's a
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passive voice it is the the best
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opportunity to show off your passive uh
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which is really really important and
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that gets you good points for um
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grammatical range and accuracy so the
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second ESS the band 7 final paragraph is
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as follows the hotel the reception and
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the facility building will be connected
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by a vehicle track while between the
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houses there will be foot paaths on the
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southern coast a pier will be placed to
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provide a safe port for sailing boats
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there is also a plan to create an
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artificial Lake on the East End of the
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island comparing to the initial so
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compared to should be the initial look
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of the island only the beach and some
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trees will be the same in the same place
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while while the general prospects of the
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island will change significantly okay so
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I'm sure you agree this is much more
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coherent and all in all a very good
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response there's some great vocab which
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is just what we need we're talking about
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useful vocab for this kind of task
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connected by placed positioned create
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change significantly I love the word
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significantly so for me that's a great
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word and grammatically the student
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continues with the future passive that's
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that's how they've started so at least
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they're consistent going all the way
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through and use some good connecting
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words while really useful connecting
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word you've heard us say that before um
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and also compared to obviously because
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they're comparing the first picture
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before the development and then the
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second picture Okay so hopefully that's
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given you an idea there for that kind of
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map question what to do and what to
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watch out for uh let's have a look now
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at a different kind of map question this
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image is taken from the coursebook
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called ready for IELTS published by
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melan exams and here there two maps uh
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dated 2002 2009 representing changes in
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town and it clearly gives the name of
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the town which is Lakeside so let me
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read you a few sentences from the sample
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answer which is given to this question
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just to illustrate some useful vocab for
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this kind of task so firstly the
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residential a uh neighborhood in the
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southwest of the town was transformed
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into a shopping center and the
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industrial complex expanded to replace
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the wooded area in the
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Southeast okay that's a pretty intense
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sentence uh so the response is using
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some of the labels given so it's quite
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clearly labeled this map and it's okay
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the labels are there to help you uh you
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can do that uh but it also uses some
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really good vocabulary for describing
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change and some very good passive verbs
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and geographical Lexus as well so uh you
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can see that the southwest of the time
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was transformed so nice geographical and
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nice passive and again industrial
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complex expanded to replace the wooded
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area in the Southeast so every single
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word there is doing a really good job uh
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another sentence let me give you an
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example the Oldtown and derel Warehouse
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in the north were knocked down and
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replaced by a car park and the
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construction of some offices so the old
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town and derel warehous house really
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useful um adjective there derel means
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not used anymore abandoned in the north
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were knocked down and replaced by so
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you've got nice phrasal verb there
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knocked down in the passive and replaced
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by watch out for these prepositions
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replaced by really important expanded to
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um always look learn the preposition
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with the verb um and construction of
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some offices okay so there's some good
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stuff in that one um see have a look at
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the picture maybe you can have uh see if
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you can write your own response to that
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using some of the words that we're using
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here we're mentioning and I want to just
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sum up this tutorial here by giving you
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some really useful words and some vocab
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which you could use for these questions
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so if you're not happy with this vocab
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uh make a note of it because it is
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really really important uh I would
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suggest verbs such as transformed into
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so watch out for the prepositions here
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replaced by developed expanded so we can
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have expand into something like that
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construct demolish extend and become
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these are all really really good verbs
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here um now if you like playing with
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words a transformation you'll know that
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as an extra bonus these can all be
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transformed into nans so you can have
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development constr destruction
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demolition extension
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expansion and so on so that makes these
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words super flexible and will show a
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great lexical range you're showing the
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examiner you can manipulate these words
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from a verb to a noun um even as an
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adjective some of them so that's really
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really helpful uh you can also use some
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Expressions so built in place of turned
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into built on the site of reconstructed
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to become and other really useful
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Expressions so these are nice
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collocations here Urban
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transformation urban renewal or Urban
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regeneration and not only is this quite
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good vocab for the task one Maps uh it's
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also really useful for your task 2 s as
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well especially if you're writing about
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towns or anything to do with that so
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there we have it we have looked at a
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band Six type task one map essay and
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compared this to a band seven map essay
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we've also looked at another type of map
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question the one about towns and
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reviewed some core vocabulary which I
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think is needed for this kind of
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