THE EMAIL TO THE HIRING MANAGER
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Apr 4, 2024
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What do you even write on that email you send off when you're sending your CV or on your motivational letter
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Is that the time to tell the hiring manager about your problem
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Your worldly woes. Oh my cat ran away is I was trying to take it to the vet now
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I need money to pay search and rescue so she can be found My boyfriend broke up with me and he took all my money with me. What can I do? No, stop
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Hi guys, my name is Len and welcome to my channel If you're visiting or passing by do not forget subscribe if you're a regular welcome back. I feel like I should say hi guys
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So welcome back. My name is Len. I'm sorry guys. I haven't been here. But today we are back and we're talking about
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motivational letters and what do you even write because I Get a lot of CV, although I am NOT an agency and I do work internally for a company. I've told you guys this before
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People gotta try and I refuse to take your guys's coins to say I'm revamping them
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When you can use the free CV template that is on the link in my bio
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In my description box, okay Well on YouTube on the description box, there is a link with my CV template
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Just download that there is a video attached with Step by step about revamping your CV serve your coins. You can do it yourself
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Okay So what do you even write I get a lot of CVs
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I think I've mentioned this and a lot of you guys are telling me about your worldly problems, right
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I'm an orphan. I have no food. My husband left me with two kids. I'm a baby mama
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My daddy just this it's mostly the ladies with this set stories. I don't know why
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Perhaps we feel like maybe the hiring manager will feel sorry for us
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Perhaps we'll feel like but guys the world doesn't care Remember the story I told you about my cat believe you me for me
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it's actually a real story that happened last week and I my family and I are still like trying to recover from that because
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We miss Luna. I'm sure you guys miss Luna. She is doing the complex. She was in heat
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yeah, I should have gotten a spade in time, but I Guess you found a mate to the stray cats in the complex. I still bring her food every day
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She refuses to come back home. She's still having fun. But I think now she'll come back with kittens
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Well, I'm on a tangent now, but guys you get the point no one cares I'm telling you about my kid story already like all in
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Same thing and sometimes your stories are red flags to hiring manager, right? Number one. You're telling me that
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You have nowhere to start yet. You want a remote job? So the first month how you gonna be paying for the Wi-Fi
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You see you're telling me this sad story. Oh, I'm a single mother. I have nothing to do
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Three five ten kids right now What I'm saying is someone who's going to be late every day to work because you've got ten kids to feed before you come through
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again nothing wrong with having a hundred kids, but the whole point is
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the People don't get jobs because they are feeling sorry for you. They don't hire you because they are feeling sorry for you
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That's the point. I'm trying to read across your story might actually be a big red flag
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Maybe the person that was that had the job before the one they let go
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Was always late to work because guess what? She was struggling with it. So now they're like
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Now it is I think against the law to discriminate people but come on guys with this the real world now
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They're like and guys we don't want people that come far far far or we don't want this
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So so guys point is no said stories people do not hire you to feel sorry for you
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No one is just out there to give you money what they are looking for is a skill
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So guys the whole point of employers hiring is you are it's a trade-off, right
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They are going to pay you for your skill and expertise Right and you are getting paid
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Renting out your skill and expertise so that that is all guys
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So if you've got a good voice, you can speak fluent English. You're going to be answering calls for them
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They are paying you to answer calls for them. Now. They are not gonna give you a job because
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your Boyfriend left you and you are sad and you've no one to buy you ice cream every day
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Yes, I love ice cream, right, but you cannot answer calls like
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Right, okay, so this is exactly what you now need to write guys on your
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The email so let's say someone sends you An email address they're like hey Lynn is looking this is a email address Lynn fit or remote at gmail.com
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She's looking for someone to Help her with the comments on her social media platforms, so I'm looking for a community manager
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So the email you read will be high Lynn Please find attached or I trust your days going. Well, it's all is good to greet
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Please find attached my CV for the community manager role I have two years of experience working as a community manager for discourse on tik-tok
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I've managed a platform with 10,000 subscribers in this what I'm going to do, please with any questions, please
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Let me know please find my CV attached That is it This same vibe is what you carry through to your motivation
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Your motivation is not the time for you as long as the days were used to say who I'm a team player. This is
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What likes working as a team I don't if anything writing research with people assignments in college taught me was
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teamwork sucks People only drag you down right and hiring managers know this
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So or if you are good with project manager working as a team some jobs do depend on teamwork, right
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Everyone is a team player. Oh, it's That's what that you're wasting words, right what you can do. Hey, so guys if you are writing your mother later
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Remember the job. Hey, this is a sales job Oh customer service. I will give sales jobs
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Let's do a customer service job, right? Hey High Lynn. Thank you for opening my letter. Oh, I trust your days going. Well, I
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Have attached my CV for you to go through however, please note
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I have what I've got over two years of experience working as a customer service rep for an ISP
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Service provider and internet service provider there. I was handling a hundred calls per shift
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My shift was eight hours if the if your company is to give you a QA score
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You tell them I was always getting a QF score of over 90% in every shift
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I've never I've managed to win these awards. Whatever. Whatever. I'm looking for a new job to
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Inspire me or to challenge me. I've been working two years at this company
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So I think now is the right time to look for something new to see what is out there to learn new technologies
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So guys, they know you're looking for money. You can't say I'm looking for a new job because my work environment is toxic
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No, what if you are the toxic one? You cannot say I'm looking for a new job because there is more money. Of course, they know you're looking for money
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But don't say that it's weird guys. I know say things such as
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I want to learn new technologies. I want to Broaden my horizons. It's been two years. I think I've learned everything
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I need to learn about customer service at leanfido.com I'm looking for a new challenge things like that doesn't have to be long guys. I promise you
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So the key thing is when you're looking for a job, please Leave the personal things out of it. No one cares. Okay, no one cares
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If anything your personal life could be costing you job opportunities stick to the facts
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I've got a qualification in HR. I've done eight years of experience in recruitment
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I've recruited for these roles. These are the roles that I can do. This is my closing rate
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Ratio whatever and that is it done if you are looking for a job
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I'm there girl. If they are looking for someone that is done executive recruitment
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I'm there girl. If they are looking for an HR stroke recruiter that loves tick-tock
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I'm there girl. They can already see that So now they call me for the interview to now be about my personality that will now be the determining factor
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But they already know what I can bring to the table. So guys
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I love this interview. I love this interview. I love this interview
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So guys I love this chit chats, right? But as usual guys, please please join the newsletter the newsletter is to think you guys get job leads newsletter
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So really it is a win-win situation and I love getting the messages you guys send me about Oh, I've got an interview
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Lean I've got a job opportunity Lean I've been offered this that
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I will try to respond to everybody but they are not enough hours in a day, but I do see them I love them and
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Remember guys, you are amazing and don't let anyone Tell you otherwise until next time
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